Today I'm thrilled to welcome Roxanne St. Claire to the blog. I read my first Rocki book last year, and all I could think was, who is this amazing author and why the hell haven't I been reading her all along?? I
quickly rectified that, and have happily inhaled her backlist. Her Bullet Catchers series features a team of lethally sexy bodyguards and their fearless leader, Ms. Lucy Sharpe. I'm very excited because today, NOW YOU DIE, the third book in a back to back Bullet Catchers trilogy (and book 6 of the series) hits the shelves. Juicy Miss Lucy finally gets her happy ending, and I, for one, cannot wait to see what happens! Rocki, thanks so much for joining us, and being my guest for my final post as a Fog City Diva.
Thank you so much to ALL the lovely ladies at Fog City Divas – I have so many friends at this blog that I feel quite at home and welcome whenever I’m here. And please let me express my profound disappointment that the FCD doors are closing! You’ve given so many readers and writers three years of thoughtful, funny, insightful, and entertaining blogging and you will be missed.
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’m honored to be here during the last few days, and have decided to offer my farewell with a subject near and dear to writers and utterly fascinating (I hope!) to readers: characters who control their own story.
No, I didn’t believe in them, either. When I would hear a writer say, “well, the character just demanded that this happen and it changed my whole story but….” I would roll my eyes and think the same thing I did when I was childless and forced to witness a toddler tantrum in a restaurant: Get a grip, lady! Who is in control – you or that <kid> <character>? (Hah. Then I had kids.) But with the character thing? I admit, I was disdainful and a little condescending. After all, I am the writer – and I am the mistress of my little world. I can make those people do WHATEVER I want them to do. I Am In Charge.
Enter Lucy Sharpe, the leader of the cadre of über-elite bodyguards known as The Bullet Catchers, my romantic suspense series. Early on, Lucy thrilled me because she came to the page so well-formed. The moment I conceived her, I knew her. I could see her long black hair with the mysterious white streak down the left side. I knew what caused it, too. And I knew she had some Micronesian blood, worked for the CIA, favors crisp clothes in light colors, collects antiques, wears blood red nail polish, and is very….controlling. Oh, yes, this character took shape nicely, and instantly earned some fun nicknames from her men --Ms. Machiavelli and Juicy Miss Lucy being two of the more popular. And, best of all, readers responded well to the Bullet Catcher boss. From the first book, I started to get the same question over and over: when will Lucy have a book? Usually followed by, “and will Dan be her man?”
I had created a very nice little chemistry between Lucy and one of the top Bullet Catchers, Dan Gallagher, and my editor and I agreed that they would end up together in a friends-to-lovers story that would make everyone, including Lucy, happy. It would end the series…so, I hoped that story was well in the future.
Then I started FIRST YOU RUN, the fourth full length book in the series (there are also two novellas) and the first of what I’d planned to be “a trilogy within in the series” – all being released very closely in 2008. As with every Bullet Catcher book, the opening scene features Lucy with the hero, discussing the “assignment” that launches the story. In this scene, I needed another character, the “glue” who would hold all three books together in the trilogy, the person with the motivation for solving the overarcing mystery that connects the books. I thought it would be fun if he were a former Bullet Catcher, having left the company under a cloud, and maybe Lucy wasn’t so sure she wanted him around.
So I sketched out the character of Jack Culver (lightly, since I usually discover the character as I write) and added him to the scene with Lucy and Adrien Fletcher, the hero of that book. Then I wrote the scene.
No. Correct that. The scene wrote itself.
When I finished, I remember distinctly that I leaned back, looked at the words on the screen, and thought, whoa. What was THAT all about? There was some mighty powerful chemistry between Jack and Lucy. Who knew she had such a potent reaction – and not all good – to this man? Hmmm. I filed that, and moved on, writing as planned. (Or as close to “plan” as I am able to stay. Different blog!)
Then I started the next book, THEN YOU HIDE. Still, in control of my world. But, damn, if that Lucy Sharpe didn’t climb right into my head and demand more pages…with Jack. And every time I gave into that urge, their conflict grew, the electricity arced, and neither Dan nor I liked it. Not one bit.
Characters don’t dictate the story – writers do. Right? Then why was I waking up in the middle of the night as I reached the midway point on that book? Why was I hearing Lucy’s voice in my head? Why was I imagining Lucy and…Jack? What force acted on me to sit down and – just hypothetically, mind you – sketch out an entirely different third book where Lucy and Jack teamed up to take down the ultimate killer?
Why? Because I am here to tell you, ladies and gents, that those fictional people who exist in our heads, hearts, and fingertips -- they can talk! And they have opinions! And, damn if they can’t change the course of their own stories.
I ran the “hypothetical” idea past my agent. Loved it. Called my editor and proposed a complete change to the third book. She loved it. Sat down and devised a whole new plot for the third book. I loved it. Lucy would be the heroine, and Jack the hero. And it would NOT be the last book in the series. But what about Dan?
I’ve had literally hundreds of letters about Lucy and the expectation that Dan would be her man. But Lucy had a different idea, and I hope that my readers understand. To help them, I’ve written an essay that appears on my web site, www.roxannestclaire.com <http://www.roxannestclaire.com/> explaining how this woman famous for her control actually exercised her power over me, too. And Dan Gallagher gets his happy ending in the next Bullet Catcher book, coming in summer 2009, giving Dan all he deserves and more.
And, so, life teaches us lessons. I will never again look skyward with derision when writers wax about characters who talk to them and insist plots be turned a certain way. Like an unruly toddler, having a pushy, demanding, vocal character of my own has taught me humility and sympathy.
No surprise, Lucy knew what she was talking about. I’m thrilled with her story (literally, *her* story) and hope readers are, too. NOW YOU DIE is in bookstores TODAY!!!!
And I’d love to hear from others who’ve had this same experience! I’ll be here all day to answer questions, chat about writing and life, and hang out in Fog City!
xoxo
Roxanne will be popping in all day, so feel free to ask her some questions. One lucky poster will win the Bullet Catcher book of her choice!
I'd like to take this opportunity to say a big fat thank you to the Divas for including me in this wonderful group, and to all the visitors who've taken the time to visit our blog. I'll miss you! And to show my appreciation, I'm giving away signed copies of DELICIOUS, A TASTE OF HONEY, and PRIVATE PARTY to one lucky poster as well. Thanks again for all the cyber love, and take care everyone!